Nature's vivid color (Tanka)

Tanka

Life's vivid color 

all nature streams overflow

filling the hour 

as a cool brisk walk soothes me 

taking in a soothing breath

Author's Note

Tanka are usually of nature
it's line syllable format is of 5/7/5/7/7
Thank You if you review my write.

Reviews

[Writergurl]

love the picture and the form. I may have to try and write one, one day.

[Kim S.]

Tanka's aren't really all that hard, Thank you for your review

[Ken Simm.]

I don't usually care much for form but this enthralls me.

[Kim S.]

Well thank you so much. I appreciate it.

[emmajoygreen]

Yes, yes and yes! How true your words, how fine their meaning and your creativity.

[Kim S.]

Thank you so much for your wonderful review.

[emmajoygreen]

There's no point in reading then running without a kind word left behind. :)

[Kim S.]

your comment made me smile today. so true : )
I hope you have a wonderful day.

[emmajoygreen]

And... it's the first of May! Let's smile in the better weather!