Beautiful Day (Haiku)

Beautiful Day (Haiku)

A Poem by Kim S.
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Haiku

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A beautiful day 
is in the horizon soon
the birds are singing 

© 2024 Kim S.


Author's Note

Kim S.
a haiku,
syllables are 5,7,5 in each line, and are of nature in form.
Thank you if you review my write. I appreciate you.

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mou
Picture (a bright day) and sound (birds' song) ~ perfect recipe for Haiku!
- mou

Posted 3 Months Ago


Lovely haiku, genre used perfectly, words descriptive, beautiful picture. Many thanks for sharing.[

Posted 4 Months Ago


Sounds like a beautiful day indeed...
The birds sing beautifully.
Nice haiku...
Keep it up! Take good care.
😄

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kim S.

4 Months Ago

thank you so much for your review
The_Ancient_Rock

4 Months Ago

You are welcome.
😄
Yes when the birds sing, we know it’s a happy day… nice Haiku
Warmly, B

Posted 4 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kim S.

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your review
Betty Hermelee

4 Months Ago

You're very welcome Kim
Warmly, B
Very optimistic haiku. Excellent one..

Posted 4 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kim S.

4 Months Ago

thank you so much for your review, I appreciate it
A perfect example of haiku that says more than the sum of its parts and fills the page with brightness and nature in all its wonder.
If people wanted to see how haiku should be done then they should look no further than this.
Excellent.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kim S.

4 Months Ago

Aw well thank you so much, I appreciate your kind words and review
I love hearing the birds sing, it brightens the day.
You can tell it's going to be a grand day ahead.
Very lovely Haiku.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kim S.

4 Months Ago

me too, thank you for your review.
A beautiful Haiku for a beautiful day to start a beautiful season down here. Thanks for sharing Kim.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kim S.

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your review
I loved this piece,
I enjoy listening to the birds early in the morning,
sweet melodies.
-Amy

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kim S.

4 Months Ago

Yep!! Thanks for your review
Amy R

4 Months Ago

You're welcome
This summed up my early morning. Beautiful haiku Kim. A serenade of bird song.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kim S.

4 Months Ago

I woke up to the sounds of birds outside this morning. Thank you for your review.
Chris Shaw

4 Months Ago

You are welcome :)

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Added on May 1, 2024
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Been married for 15 years this year. I am still as happy as the day we met. I love my husband so much. I've been around the cafe here for about 13 years. I had an account once but closed it years ago... more..

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