Chains

Chains

A Poem by Beccy

  

Days come, days go, unbending, unending, 
one step in front of the other;
inexorable in their progress as they slip
through cracks in the pavement and forge                    
chains stronger even than imagination itself.


It's like the careless dismissal of adoration,
or wrapping the moon in brown paper and
forsaking a festive ribbon; allowing 
everything to fade, until all that's left 
are promises we never remember keeping.


But then, the five year old child
lying sleepy in my arms, looks up and 
whispers, 'I love you so much mummy;'
And the chains break, dissolved into nothing
by the salt-sweet taste of a single tear of joy;

And truth be told, those chains never really stood a chance. 

© 2015 Beccy


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I had a long conversation with a severely depressed friend of mine and she talked openly,
and even glowingly, about chains. The psychological ones that manifested themselves often
from the physical ones that never really existed. Nothing can really unlock the chains from
another persons soul like the spellbinding resolve of love. And the love of a child to his
mother is unconditional.

The sad thing (to me) is that so many woman want a child in order to find, on this
lonely earth, love in any form. And thus usher in a life of despair and poverty
just to achieve it. Which should tell civilization something about both chains and how love
is hostile to any inadequacy...

and any bondage......Great poem my friend....dana

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I had a long conversation with a severely depressed friend of mine and she talked openly,
and even glowingly, about chains. The psychological ones that manifested themselves often
from the physical ones that never really existed. Nothing can really unlock the chains from
another persons soul like the spellbinding resolve of love. And the love of a child to his
mother is unconditional.

The sad thing (to me) is that so many woman want a child in order to find, on this
lonely earth, love in any form. And thus usher in a life of despair and poverty
just to achieve it. Which should tell civilization something about both chains and how love
is hostile to any inadequacy...

and any bondage......Great poem my friend....dana

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love truly sets us free... free of pain, free to be ourselves.
Rally nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Beccy
Beccy

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I'm forty four, single and have a lovely fifteen year old son called Charlie. I've been writing poetry and short stories since I can remember. I have always been an assiduous reader of poetry and real.. more..

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