Syrian war is NOT your business

Syrian war is NOT your business

A Poem by Salar Majak
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seriously why does every government gets a say in this???

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I don't want your pity

I only want to grieve alone..

To cry, with all my heart to scream:

''why did it have to be my home?"'


S**t happens....that I know

but why completely destroyed?

why does it have to be my Syria?

Killed........Abandoned...........alone.......


It'll all be forgotten by the world

like nothing had ever happened

in two or even three years later

maybe a little bit more


Don't dare say I'm wrong!

Remember Vietnam? Iraq?

remember Palestine?

didn't think so, no.


This is why I don't need your pity

or world's governments to play a role

If it's dying... let it die in peace

Death is more merciful than foreigners souls


Don't fight then blame others

this battle is certainly not yours

you'll just turn your backs on us later

after starting a third world war


Forgive me for like this ranting

war strips courage from my core

but the pain of losing my country

hurts too much to be ignored

© 2013 Salar Majak


Author's Note

Salar Majak
Russia, America, China, Brittan, the whole world's governments are planning to get into the Syrian war and that'll just make things worse

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I could well understand and feel your position. I am from a country which was colonized for 300 years by foreigners and history reveals that our forefathers had been treated as second class citizens in our own country. After fighting for our freedom my country (or our leaders) allowed itself to surrender a part of its sovereignty to foreign domination. But if only for humanitarian considerations, I do not see anything wrong for other countries to be extending assistance. yet, there is always the possibility that some countries would be extending assistance with a hidden political and economic intentions. This is something every citizen should be alarmed about. Very creative vent. May Peace be with your country.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

that is right, every word you said :)
i'm glad you agree and i'm really glad you like it



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I don't know what to say. Iraq, Syria and Allah knows who's next.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

true, thanks for reading
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Well done, It speaks on my behalf.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

thanks i'm glad you like it
I agree, the last thing this country needs is to go into another war. Most of us here don't want that, let's hope that our voices are heard.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

let's hop so :) thank you
Powerful read and plea , you hit the nail on the head !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

thank you!
I blame imperialist countries like the US and Russia. Clearly tey think that no one is smart or strong enough to fix their problems. Amazing write and I know you said you want to Greece alone but if you need someone to vent to you can always message me :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

thank you Ankara :) i appreciate it
Aurora I don't know what to say. There is no solving something as out of control as the Syrian conflict. War fuels itself in a way no one can truly understand until they're caught in the middle of one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

yeah that's absolutely correct, unfortunately
thanks my friend :)
Aurora, watching the news I've definitely come to share your views on the matter. All these countries are so arrogant in believing they can "help" this situation...my country perhaps most of all.This was a lovely poem, though there were a few spelling/grammar errors, so here:

"in to or even three years later"-----this would be "two" :p
Irac is spelled Iraq. xP

Thats it, good job. X3 Youre really improving! Keep writing like this Aurora. x3

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

thank you Riley, didn't pay much attention to spelling mistakes :O i'll correct them now.
America, Canada, UK, France, Australia, Germany, and to a lesser degree many others...
are SLAVES of Israel.

Israel ordered them to attack.
The Project for the New American Century.
Cheney, former head of an Israeli think tank.
A staged New Pearl Harbor.
The building of greater Israel.
The new temple.

It really comes down to one thing, a really basic thing,
Israel takes as much as it can. In the very very worst scenario, they agree to stop where they are and not take more. They will settler every centimeter of Palestine knowing they get to keep it.
IF THEY CAN... they want lots of Lebanon, lots of Egypt, lots of Syria, lots of Iraq.
How is Israel doing for oil? Great. They sent their slaves to attack Iraq, now the pipelines guarded by the slaves pump to Israeli refineries in Haifa.

Point is: when it stops, their psycho Nazi race nationalism war god fantasy stops.
Can they stop?
No. That is really their defining nature. They hurt their neighbors until their neighbors honestly do GO MAD! and kick them out. Happens every time.
They never ever stop.

The Slaves will destroy Syria for them... OR... Israelis will dress up as Muslims, murder lots of women and kids.. again like all the times before.

Slaves will invade or they will be punished. That is not under debate.

If all people want to start another war for them is a 'red line crossed' by a terror attack that kills women and kid goyim... they are more than happy to provide that. They will gas women and kids till the fat lady sings, if that is all you want to war for them.

In their religion, subhuman goyim mean nothing. 'Even the best of the goyim deserve death'.
They don't have any Christian values to break.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

i think you are right, in every word, it pains me to see that all of this is happening and we can't .. read more
If it helps, there isn't a single American I've heard or read say that we should get involved there. I know the Brits are out. France wants to do something.. but that's a disincentive.. ha.

The American people are fed up and tired of war. Obama promised us he'd get our sons and daughters out of the middle east.

As for Syria, my heart goes out to you and all her people. somewhere let us all pray for solution; for peace.

Posted 11 Years Ago


4 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

hopefully there will be peace. i really hope that no one interferes because that will just cause mor.. read more
This is fantastic work. I completely agree with you. America needs to stop interfering abroad because it is always a disaster and we do more damage than good. So sorry for everything you and your country is going through.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

thank you :) i appreciate this

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