Must love ivory towers!

just readXD

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Sighed and smiled reading your words. What joys do we lose while crawling through the mud and mire? And how if more could walk into their dreams for awhile, and see what's truly of value; these sacred towers of light. I wish this for a world that seems to live in shadows, in endless sorrows. Dreams, sweet dreams.

[Salar Majak]

wow! that review was better than the poem itself!Hahahaha
i'm not surprised though! your words have always inspired me old friend
thank you

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, my friend! How your presence is such a poem! Ah, and your kindness knows no bounds. Let your music ever flow. :)

[Pranav Malhotra]

Lovely !

[Salar Majak]

thank you!

[Rhianne Ney]

This is a great poem, sometimes we want to stop the time but it never belongs to us. We can't be selfish and hold it for ourselves, (:

[Salar Majak]

i know!! but we do love to think about it! :) thanks!

[Rhianne Ney]

Yeah, you're welcome and thanks for reading

[Coyote Poetry]

"spend hours in your ivory tower,
amidst the things you love the most,
do you even dare?"
Would be nice to have a ivory tower to go to. A lot of thoughts to ponder in the poem. Good when two people with same desire can find some kind of peace together. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Salar Majak]

:) thank you for reading, and yes!, it would be nice to get someone to your comfort zone, it shows you trust them

[Jack...]

Very peaceful this thought of slipping away into your own mind to wait out the ugliness of the world. I as well often revert inward to find that peace that i seek. Very nice.

[Salar Majak]

:) thanks!!, and that is a wonderful place isn't it?

[Jack...]

Indeed it is.

[Zahra]

no i won't consider you crazy. This poem maybe seen as full of fantasy and desire, but the truth is that we can perform well in the outer world if our heart is full of peace and mind has the ability to lessen the stress and fight demotivation and fear. And for these things your inner must be cured. Not unhealthy at less. The spirit truly has no limits. Wonderful write.

[Zahra]

sorry abt 2nd last line. Not unhealthy 'at all', i meant.

[CookieDough]

Very deep! Beautiful:)

[Salar Majak]

thanks!!!

[Junert]

And peaceful, and no might even know you're there.

[Salar Majak]

yes!!!!! absolutely!!, they wouldn't :) thank you!

[Baby Ricochet]

Great rhyme with a great message. Outstanding write!

[Salar Majak]

thank you!. i'm really glad you like it!

[Craig2591]

It's something we ALL should do from time to time.

[Salar Majak]

:) yeah, you're right!, thanks!!

[Joylene Miller-Rios]

I love this. Never Ending Story was and still is my fav. childhood movie. Wouldn't be great is life was like that

[Salar Majak]

oh if life was like that you'd see something quite different from what there is now!
thanks a lot for reading!