Must love ivory towers!

just readXD

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Sighed and smiled reading your words. What joys do we lose while crawling through the mud and mire? And how if more could walk into their dreams for awhile, and see what's truly of value; these sacred towers of light. I wish this for a world that seems to live in shadows, in endless sorrows. Dreams, sweet dreams.

[Salar Majak]

wow! that review was better than the poem itself!Hahahaha
i'm not surprised though! your words have always inspired me old friend
thank you

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, my friend! How your presence is such a poem! Ah, and your kindness knows no bounds. Let your music ever flow. :)

[barleygirl]

Your author's note sounds a little apologetic, like there's something wrong with your premise. On the other hand, I get sick of all the poems written about bad stuff, so I'm delighted to see a poem that has uninterrupted bliss as a goal! Are we obligated to be miserable just becuz the world is? Do we feel guilty when we enjoy simple pleasures instead of mourning all the world's tragedies? I think not! Your poem is the perfect prescription to set ourselves free. Your details are exquisite & well-described. I wish more people felt this way & wrote about it often! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Michael G. Smith]

I see you like Metallica. I listen to Eye of the beholder over and over. Great song and Fade to black help me understand my mother's suicide.

[Salar Majak]

may God rest your moms' soul, i love fade to black, and Eye of the beholder is a great song indeed , thanks again

[Michael G. Smith]

Beautiful piece. I Wish I Could Do This more. I've found being a dad, husband and grandfather I find my joy in giving all my time to others. I will share this poem with them.

[Salar Majak]

thanks a lot i really do hope they like it XD

[Traci]

Ivory Tower, Never Ending Story, you just brought me back to my childhood. Such a lovely write with a dreamy effect, written with outstanding imagery and message. One of my favs of yours, well done, Sal.

[Salar Majak]

thank you a lot! i'm glad the poem could take you back to forgotten spaces of your memory :D

[The Lone Wolf Prose]

Love the nod to Never Ending Story...Very childlike and innocent...brought back memories of my youth.
A very dreamy poem. Nicely done. Perhaps more will realize and remember the magic of dreams...

LW

[Salar Majak]

Thanks a lot LW i am glad you like it

[Frieda P]

Very lovely and uplifting read, makes me want to just drift off into your poem....perhaps not a place we can linger forever but a good place to gain perspective.

[Salar Majak]

haha thank you for your words :D
you're always welcome here:)

[Frieda P]

That's good, my ivory tower is undergoing new construction ;-) haha
My pleasure Sal.

[Salar Majak]

construction is always good for ivory towers, it makes it expand ;)

[Maxine]

This is gorgeous! :)
It has an almost dreamy drift to it, and I think if one was to read it aloud I would be almost a meditation song. The rhythm to it is just flawless, and the message simple yet outstandingly clear and meaningful.
Amazing!

[Salar Majak]

Thank you so much!!!!!!i am humbled and really glad you like it

[bluessadmood]

ohh this is so beautiful my friend,no i will never blame you
if you took your way to the ivory tower,do you see me there
i ve lived there too ,for too long,just as you say,i closed all my eyes
deafened my self to all voices and cries ,like no one else lived by
i chose to hide ,i took to heavens,i built one for me,so i would not see
any others,you can enjoy all the world stupidity,and leave me there
its a place i would not trade ,its a dream i will never let go,i make my own
wishes come true,i use magic to touch,the skies and all alone
for no one would like to see or hear what i have to see and say
lovely write

[Salar Majak]

wow
one of those times where the reviwe is actually better than the poem itself hehe
and i am there, not planning to leave :)
thank you!

[bluessadmood]

you are so welcome,glad you liked my review,ha ha

[xxlheart]

your style is inviting and perfect. the content and its flow is amazing. i am speechless and humbled by this. so incredibly polished.

[Salar Majak]

i'm really glad you like this!! :) and am humbled by your review
thanks a lot

[xxlheart]

you are an enjoyable read so the pleasure was mine. :)