A rainy day

this is something i wrote when i was 8 years old :P

I wonder why
the sun wouldn't come out today.

is it something i did?
did i make her angry yesterday?

did the moon break her heart?
did her threaten to go away?

or did the clouds imprison her
to keep her from stopping the rain..

My football is waiting
dying to go out and play

but mom said: ''No''
you'll catch a cold then in bed lay

i looked at the sun
and to God begged and prayed

that tomorrow the sun will shine
and drive the night away

then went to my room
and to have fun i tried to find a way

so i wrote a sad poem
about this rainy day.

Author's Note

this is something i wrote when i was eight, i found it the other day in a toy box i used to keep, i added somethings to it but didn't want to break the innocence of an eight years old memory, so don't judge the weak phrases
enjoy.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

This was adorably, sweet, Aurora!! Doesn't seem like much separates the world's children, but the borders and governments that keep them as so..... I wrote a poem when I was 11 and looking back on it, I read what sounded very very serious in text. What ELSE I remember is, that the days that I wrote it... I was happy, still playing with He-Man dolls, pouring my KoolAid, and burping the alphabet, too. lol I feel like I miss you so much when I read you in ANY poem, and I have never even had the luxury of being able to accompany your view in front of you. "did the moon break her heart?" ....that was gorgeous or seen as someone who would have been carrying the age of 10 to see such things so intentionally, and with a humble heart to remove all that chaos that adults and anger disguise in the later years!! Beautiful, Aurora!! *Big Hugzz* I hate that little rating thing at the bottom. I would never rate anything below a 100 for you... wouldn't make sense to me at all!! One of my purest joys in reading poetry that steals away with me in ANY mood and connects with me, always. : )



xoxoxoxoxo -Your Mark

[Salar Majak]

hehehe
you read that XD, i didn't want to post it but then said iwill, never was to sure of this one, i don't know why
you wrote a poem when you were eleven!! i want to read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i guess it makes the poem more special :)
don't rate!!! i always hate rating, it's overrated. XD
thank you my dear Mark
xoxoooxoxoxxx XD-
Aurora

[Ali]

And now readers with you enjoy.

[Salar Majak]

lol thanks :)

[gentlebreeze13]

Hi there, for an eight year old who wrote a poem like this although the thought is similar with "Rain,Rain Go Away!" I would like to say that you are indeed born with this talent!

[Salar Majak]

lol i think i was affected by ''rain rain go away''XD
i did adjust the poem though hehe
thanks

[gentlebreeze13]

you are welcome dear

[Scott Durham]

A joy to read.

[Salar Majak]

Glad you enjoyed it :-)

[bluessadmood]

i will take it from the side..
think the sun did not come out,and we are for a long night to come
i ve always seen it,like the world is all crying tears and rain
the moon has nothing to do with it,think he is angry too
maybe we will not see another night or day too
for it seems like the world is changing
everything is taking a strong turn,maybe we will
never see things like we used to,its our fate its like we are doomed
this was a twist to your lovely write,gave me lots of thoughts
lovely write

[Salar Majak]

I am glad it made you have all those thoughts. Again, outstanding review. Looking forward to read some of your work :-) thanks

[Nia Hope]

That is really cute love it! Awesome to see that even then you were writing most kids don't care about these things :)

[Salar Majak]

haha, well i did adjust it, thanks a lot though

[Siren]

i love it! anyone who judges this doesn't realize how precious it is! a great write, my dear. absolutely wonderful.

[Salar Majak]

thanks Siren!!!

[Siren]

welcome [:

[Mr Edd]

It realy was a sad rainy day.

[Salar Majak]

yeah hehe thanks!

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[AWickedMoon]

What a cute little poem! Me and my brother always loved the rain, when it started to get rainy we would gather wood and such then attempt to build little shelters under the trees in the front yard. I loved the last verses

"so i wrote a sad poem
about this rainy day."

They just seem like such clean and pure lines. Thankyou for sharing
-Wicked

[Salar Majak]

:) thank you for reading
and it's soooo cute how you and your brother tried to build your shelter from rain :3