to unlock my tangled heart and receive my troubled soul?
Am i ever to see that light?
or would i be thrown into the darkest abyss of all.
don't get me wrong.... my wish isn't to die!
It's just the path we've all chosen something we cannot control.
we're all going there someday so why bother let it take so long?
But still we stay... hanging by a thread to the life we so firmly hold so scared to lose the fight though we know destined to lose we are after all......
I think the music threw me off, but I don't know. I felt like my chest was crying and I wanted t dance with you so badly.... so badly!! The music is STILL playing and I find myself still wishing these things that I do not own; my feelings, my thoughts on poetry and your beautiful page, and why I write... What a beautiful touch, my Aurora has when it seems that so easily you tempt the very thought of what births our dreams and simple tasks to avert them for selfish reasons. One should think that by listening to you in poem, that we ALL feel Loved, and are transported to walls with no borders, and borders where there are no rules to apply to all. I get to drift in these places with you, when reading you, and I find you to be of a most ageless and romantic heart, far beyond your years on Earth!! This world cannot be that cruel that I am not able to meet you in the latter years of my life. It CAN'T be that cruel to meet a poetess I LOVE in poem past the very words she performs across her pages... The music still plays and I am with you in this poetic dance, and selfishly wish it not to end..... Forgive me, Aurora. : ) So precious are the few that we come to know, that hopefully in this life on monsters and angels... ones will peek and gather our interests to hold and keep us in their forever if we are to be so lucky!! Can I be such a person to be allowed to know Aurora in her future?!! : ) Beautiful poem.... my goodness. I had freakin' tears in my eyes and I didn't DARE wipe them because you put them there. They were yours....
xoxooxoxo -Your Mark
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
knowing some one through their words is some times deceitful my dear Mark ;)
be careful of it,.. read moreknowing some one through their words is some times deceitful my dear Mark ;)
be careful of it, lol i'm just teasing you.
i started the song and felt myself dancing with you selfishly too XD it felt good
i'd never put tears in your eyes, never even try to put in anyone else's it pains me, wipe them dear Mark, i want to be remembered for the laughter not for the tears :)
truly,
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo- Aurora
11 Years Ago
All that "emotion sharing" and I forgot to tell you how I reacted to your poem. lol If.. read more
All that "emotion sharing" and I forgot to tell you how I reacted to your poem. lol If we are destined to lose, and feel such a way wash over us, we are doomed to fill such role... I know a lot of what you write is exaggerating certain moods and fantasies for telling a great story or setting up a really great question to ask ourselves, but that is the mystery and the Love: Aurora!! Hope springs another day; the days where we let down a guard a bit, and enjoy the energy of those who surround us. ....I am still dancing with you and wish to for as long as you shall allow, Aurora!! xoxoxoxoxoxxoxxooxoxoxo My "xo's" are longer!! *sticks tongue out and giggle* ...great poem. Beautiful Aurora.... -Your Mark
For me, saying that we are just waiting to die is unfulfilling, after all, is it not about the quality of life we live and what we make of ourselves that is purposeful? One lyric I always quote when this subject is brought to light is "it's not the years in your life, it's the life in your years", nice write
We are, Sal, destined to win, to live, love and reproduce. The reason why is that every bacteria, amoeba, moss, mouse, moose...eagle, lion, monkey... man, woman and child is imbued, is wired, is tuned ,is programmed to survive.
However, at the end of the day, though we ourselves may no longer exist in an animate form, life goes on. The life force is so profoundly strong.... as if life itself needs to perpetuate itself in one form or other whilst we are merely one of its temporary vectors.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I love the way you put your words together i think i agree with you. Thanks
This is hauntingly beautiful, and I think it is best to go down in flames, as in, die. The music makes it all the more lovely and melancholy. Amazing, dear lady.
hey i'm Salar, you can call me Sal, or Aurora
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