When the earth rants.

When the earth rants.

A Poem by Salar Majak

Let me crash

let me crash and close your eyes

for this world's misery

isn't yours to worry about

the crying children who starve

are not your children to feed

Yes, yes, just lie wrapped in your cocoon

waiting for your end to come

boy it's coming so soon

close your eyes

close your ears

let it fall

let it crash

let the earth burn

for you only think

about your childish needs

not realizing, the world's pain

is all caused by your deeds

your fear of words

your coward soul

your rotten heart

that'll be sucked by worms

Ashes to ashes.

Dust to dust

to me you'll return

in my hall you'll fall

one day...

you will die all

and my trees shall grow again

my birds shall sing again

and from your sins

I'll forever be purified.

 

 

our earth is now silently enduring the pain we are causing her to feel, but one day this mother of ours will say ''ENOUGH"

 

© 2013 Salar Majak


Author's Note

Salar Majak
forgive me if this one does not live up to be a complete POEM in word structure, it's a rant and i couldn't make it look any better. So let's just say that it's not a poem, it's just a thought. Enjoy

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"you will die all
and my trees shall grow again
my birds shall sing again
and from your sins
I'll forever be purified."
I hope the above statement is true. Man is doing his best to destroy all that is beautiful. I like the strong statements and question brought to life by your poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

thank you for reading ^.^ the statement is scary but true, i guess, i'm glad you like it :D



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We deserve it but it's sad and terrifying.
Your expression of Earth's ire and anger was excellent.
I loved this poem and thank you for sharing it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

thank you for reading!!
...well then I love your thoughts my friend...continue in your goodness...=)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

:) thanks
Night

11 Years Ago

...always...=)

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