When the earth rants.

Let me crash

let me crash and close your eyes

for this world's misery

isn't yours to worry about

the crying children who starve

are not your children to feed

Yes, yes, just lie wrapped in your cocoon

waiting for your end to come

boy it's coming so soon

close your eyes

close your ears

let it fall

let it crash

let the earth burn

for you only think

about your childish needs

not realizing, the world's pain

is all caused by your deeds

your fear of words

your coward soul

your rotten heart

that'll be sucked by worms

Ashes to ashes.

Dust to dust

to me you'll return

in my hall you'll fall

one day...

you will die all

and my trees shall grow again

my birds shall sing again

and from your sins

I'll forever be purified.

 

 

our earth is now silently enduring the pain we are causing her to feel, but one day this mother of ours will say ''ENOUGH"

 

Author's Note

forgive me if this one does not live up to be a complete POEM in word structure, it's a rant and i couldn't make it look any better. So let's just say that it's not a poem, it's just a thought. Enjoy

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"you will die all
and my trees shall grow again
my birds shall sing again
and from your sins
I'll forever be purified."
I hope the above statement is true. Man is doing his best to destroy all that is beautiful. I like the strong statements and question brought to life by your poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Salar Majak]

thank you for reading ^.^ the statement is scary but true, i guess, i'm glad you like it :D

[Felecia]

Not all poems need to really live up to their word structure entirely sis (although sometimes it nice), but to me, it's all about the message and the feel of it that I receive, and I've definitely gotten it from you, like I always do.
Mother Earth is already fighting back, like most say, and I believe it's true.
Excellent write sis, I love how you used different font sizes and colours to emphase certain words.
Well done

[Salar Majak]

awwww thanks sis *hugs* i agree!!

[Felecia]

*hugs back* Good! ahaha

[de_maruf]

good

[Salar Majak]

kk thanks

[quinfinn]

oh, trust me, mother earth is already fighting back....and she is winning through sheer attrition. every major storm kills humans and cost billions and mother never runs out of them ...ever notice how mankind always pays dearly for his arrogance toward nature? she has just begun to wipe us all out. this is an excellent write!

[Salar Majak]

thanks!!! and i agree with you

[Annabelle Lee]

Exactly!

[Salar Majak]

:D glad you can relate

[larryb]

Good write with a interesting subject...Good Job :)

[Salar Majak]

thank you!!

[WingsToFly]

Well done! A blunt message that needs to be conveyed!

[Salar Majak]

thanks!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it is a rant i can relate to.

it depicts someone in my family...at whom i am quite angry right now.

perfect!

ps

my girlfriend is left handed...

i like a southpaw's perspective.

[Salar Majak]

:D thanks so very much!
a southpaw's perspective, i like that expression :D

[Jack...]

The message is loud and clear...very cool

[Salar Majak]

thank you :D

[Cara]

nice thought ^_^

[Richard Man]

Great rant, good cause.... Gaia you are telling us.... sorry got to go the kids are starving...after all they haven't eaten a thing since breakfast... This is a lie... they've grown up and flown the nest and I'm a grandad. Still it was a tad ironic.

[Salar Majak]

Ironic indeed, sad though, Gaia needs to be looked after, not destroyed. thanks Mr. Richard :D