Playing love

before you listen to the song please forward it to the 37 second then listen 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"who are you"

he said with despair,

engulfing his heart

 

''please''

he pleaded

trying to find her so hard

 

''who are you,

who raids my dreams,

who counquers me all''

 

''tell me please,

show your face,

appear from the dark''

 

''so fair,

so bright,

so elegant do your eyes shine''

 

''melting my ice

releacing my soul

saving my life.''

 

At his piano he sits,

plays non stop

thinking of her eyes.

 

thus the musice flows

right from his thoughts

and flies so high

 

resting at the end

with a breath talkin effect

in her lonely heart.

 

taking her away

with an enchanting thrill

to where he was

 

she touches the fragil keys

sheds a tear

in the empty hall

 

then turns around

to see him there

and with a kiss they start.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

i heard this peice while watching a movie called ''the legend of1900'' and couldn't but try to translate the emotion hidden in the music
enjoy and please tell me if i as able to put 1 percent of the music into words.
enjoy.

Reviews

[Nick.B]

nice music...also the poem is very well written, great job

[Salar Majak]

Thank you

[being me]

sweet and fresh like music:)

[Salar Majak]

thanks!

[being me]

:)

[Night]

...I watched the video on you tube...nice...tried to embed a copy for you here but it wouldn't take....sweet poem too...:)

[Salar Majak]

thanks anyways :) you really should watch the movie it's amazing!
thanks for reading!!

[Night]

...you're very welcome...:)

[Salar Majak]

i couldn't publish the music right :P