Playing love

before you listen to the song please forward it to the 37 second then listen 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"who are you"

he said with despair,

engulfing his heart

 

''please''

he pleaded

trying to find her so hard

 

''who are you,

who raids my dreams,

who counquers me all''

 

''tell me please,

show your face,

appear from the dark''

 

''so fair,

so bright,

so elegant do your eyes shine''

 

''melting my ice

releacing my soul

saving my life.''

 

At his piano he sits,

plays non stop

thinking of her eyes.

 

thus the musice flows

right from his thoughts

and flies so high

 

resting at the end

with a breath talkin effect

in her lonely heart.

 

taking her away

with an enchanting thrill

to where he was

 

she touches the fragil keys

sheds a tear

in the empty hall

 

then turns around

to see him there

and with a kiss they start.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

i heard this peice while watching a movie called ''the legend of1900'' and couldn't but try to translate the emotion hidden in the music
enjoy and please tell me if i as able to put 1 percent of the music into words.
enjoy.

Reviews

[amarlaksh]

aurora this is a great and brave attempt...and you have successfully completed it..excellent piece ^_^

[Mr Edd]

Not one but many

[Salar Majak]

:Dthanks!

[Mr Edd]

U welcome

[Mr Edd]

U welcome

[dunnia]

nicely written

[Salar Majak]

thank you!

[InsanityWriter]

You did a great job with this. ^_^ I enjoyed! :)

[Salar Majak]

:D glad you did, thanks!!

[de_maruf]

fine

[Salar Majak]

:] :] :]thank you i'm glad you like it

[WingsToFly]

Wow, it's very nice.

[Wolfwind]

Wow! I think you did a really good job at capturing the emotions of the music with your poetry! You're words carried the flow very well and the feelings were soft and subtle like the score itself. Awesome Ink Aurora!

Aaron

[Salar Majak]

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are the first person that described the music along with the poetry XD, thanks Aaron!

[Annabelle Lee]

I really enjoyed the write. And what a clever title for it, too!

[Salar Majak]

thanks :D alyhough i have to addmit, the name is the same name of the music peice i was trying to describe. thanks

[Ashly Christen]

I think you def got at least 1 percent and more, so much inspiration coming from a song and a very good way to put it to use

[Salar Majak]

Thank you so much

[Carolann Dowsett]

So beautiful has an ethereal feel to it like a dance of love. Nicely written Sal.

[Salar Majak]

thanks

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)