an unanswered question

don't even havan idea where this came from

Oh fearless mountain!

ever so silently standing still.

Will to my heart one day,

your untold secrets spill?

Am i to enjoy the beautiful dream,

of flowing with river's water,that so gently streams,

and let my soul forever yell: ''free! I AM FREE!''?

Reviews

[Night]

...In Chinese tradition it is told of the fish that travels up the yellow river against the current...leaping up through the rapids, until it reaches The River Gate, where it continues up into the clouds transforming into a dragon...completing it's spiritual journey in life....free at last. Great write my friend.:)

[Salar Majak]

great story :), thanks alot, i'm glad you like the write

[Night]

...you're very welcome...:)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

its a nice write

[Salar Majak]

thanks!!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

lovely

[Salar Majak]

thank you!

[ashesonfire]

How beautiful! I know mountains hold mystery and power to a lot of people. I love the simplicity to this poem but is says a lot!

[Salar Majak]

thanks a lot, yeah, mountains have alwayse fascinated me, i'm really glad you enjoyed this one XD wasn't so sure about it

[ashesonfire]

You are very welcome :D

[de_maruf]

fine

[Salar Majak]

thanks alot

[Wolfwind]

This was a beautiful piece Aurora! The mountain has always been in icon for strength, endless time and mystery. Wether we climb it to seek wisdom, or we cross it to gain experience, it will always be an image that we gaze up to and wonder what's next.

Great Ink!
Aaron

[Salar Majak]

:) thanks!!! so much!

[Emily B]

wishing you much and continued freedom

[Salar Majak]

thanks

[Michael X]

Inventive passion entwines with imagery to create the dreamy feeling,
I like this :)

[Salar Majak]

thank you :)

[WingsToFly]

Really soft and beautiful. Loved this piece.

[Salar Majak]

thanks :D

[Zizzy Douglas]

opsy! Vry cool writeup...Although,i thinks funy...bt then, what cn i say? :-pen on dear!

[Salar Majak]

funny is good!!! :D thanks

[Zizzy Douglas]

Now this's a funy writeup...ops! Or maybe nt.,although still funy in its own way.....nice one dear!

[Salar Majak]

thanks, yeah i guess it is funny in a way :)