Number of Secrets

i think it's done... any suggestions?

1, 2, 3, now you know all about it.

4, 5, 6, now you want to forget it.

7, 8, 9, now you're regretting.

10, 11, 12, now you want to tell it.

13, 14, 15, shout to the sky.

1, 2, 3, now you know all about it.

4, 5, 6, shake your head in shame.

7, 8, 9, tell me all about it.

10, 11, 12, it's not your secret.

13, 14, 15, you know you have to spill it.

 

1,2, 3, how long can you keep it?

4, 5, 6, you're a terrible liar.

7, 8, 9, tell me all you know.

10, 11, 12, don't worry about feelings.

13, 14, 15, just say it all ready.

 

The number of secrets you try to keep

Are going to lead to you exploding.

You know you can't keep this big old secret.

Just spill the beans all ready.

Secrets were never your friend.

 

1, 2, 3, now you know all about it.

4, 5, 6, now you want to forget it.

7, 8, 9, now you're regretting.

10, 11, 12, now you want to tell it.

13, 14, 15, shout to the sky.

 

these secrets were never your's to keep.

so just tell me all about it.

people are buzzing all about you.

just spill your secret now,

no one will forget it.

 

1, 2, 3, now you know all about it.

4, 5, 6, shake your head in shame.

7, 8, 9, tell me all about it.

10, 11, 12, it's not your secret.

13, 14, 15, you know you have to spill it.

Reviews

[zainul]

I guess you are telling something about not keeping secret with anyone through this poem .It looks like a nice tricks.
Could you give a background so that peoples from other cultures may learn about it
in your comment section?
Nice poem indeed.

[Becca]

well actually it's just a song i wrote. when i wrote that, i was watching a show called pretty little liars and i kind of gave me the inspiration. i also had a secret hidden from my friend at the time and i guess that was my way of deciding if i should tell her or not.

[zainul]

Thanks for the clarification.
I wanted to ask if using numbers in such manner to keep secret is in practice in your culture.
I appreciate your endeavor.

[Becca]

it's not, but if you think about it, it can mean you have more than one secret.... i used numbers just because it's how i heard the words in my head.

[zainul]

I got the point.
It is really interesting.
Cheers!

[Becca]

thank you