Remember

Remember

A Poem by Becca

In the sky you look down,

You watch as we cry in remembrance.

Up above life is easy,

But life is frozen in place.

You are left at an age where

You can't get older 

And you can't get younger.

Memories fly by,

They make you laugh, cry, smile, and frown.

Up above is where you are.

Remember us as we remember you.

© 2012 Becca


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I dont know if you are writing about God being above always looking down. or if you lost someone you loved and are writing about them and their peace as they watch from where they are. i like this poem. it is definately a good think that i cant tell between god or a friend because i know that everyone will see your poem and look at it in a way that helps them. whether it´s God or their loved one. your writing talks!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I dont know if you are writing about God being above always looking down. or if you lost someone you loved and are writing about them and their peace as they watch from where they are. i like this poem. it is definately a good think that i cant tell between god or a friend because i know that everyone will see your poem and look at it in a way that helps them. whether it´s God or their loved one. your writing talks!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Becca
Becca

Rochester, NY



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