Bomb

I let my jealousy and selfishness take control.
Every single time, and it destroys everything.
I am my own ticking time bomb.
If someone doesn't accidentally bump it,
I'm on the verge of setting it off myself.
One small thing, brings me closer.
A self ticking time bomb.
If only I knew how to shut it down from the inside.

Reviews

[Stephen]

Lol ..now this really makes me chuckle. Bomb? Lol..yea..yeah, of course, your a pretty impressive bomb. Hope you never get blast someday in a way to let the world take away with you to somewhere else where the control of the world's be in the palm of your hands. lol Anyway, yeah, this poem's freaking awesome, makes me refresh so, i'd look forward reading your extraordinary "Bombing" stuffs.

[Becca]

well, this was more of a rhetorical poem. but thank you for the review. lol