Freak

I'm a freak.

But not the way you think.

An outcast.

A loser.

That kind of freak.

If you think otherwise,

You must not know.

That I'm an outcast,

A freak.

One that's not accepted.

It's beyond me,

Why anyone calls me a freak.

But apparently, I am.

A freak that will never fit in.

A loser and outcast for life.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

This is such a sad read Becca. When you're young, seems you always want to fit in, but it's not all it's cracked up to be, being an authentic individual and true to yourself is really what's most important. You'll see as you get older, those people won't matter much at all anymore, although the pain does linger.

[Becca]

Thank you. I know it will get better, and that it'll take a bit. But it will get there.

[Frieda P]

It's all a process, your entire life will be a learning experience if you're lucky enough, you're just at that age now where what other's think is most important to you...

[Becca]

I don't necessarily care what other's think of me though. It's how I see myself.

[Stephen]

Your aggression, the passion and of course, the power of your heart's been reflecting in your words...but freak? Really? lol I got it! You should listen to a "Pitbull" new song .. I'm a freak" it's also crazy awesome. Anyway, nice poem. Keep it up!

[Becca]

Your reviews kind of make me feel like I'm not taking my writing seriously. But again, thank you for the review.