Drag Me Down?

Drag Me Down?

A Poem by Becca

Do as you wish.
Do as you please.
Do not try to drag me down.
I will be here when you need me.
If I can't be here as you need me,
Then I am sorry.
I try my best.
I do my best.
I am who I am.
So do as you wish.
Do as you please.
Just never try to bring me down with you,
Because you will get smacked.

© 2013 Becca


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Poem is interesting. The hero of the poem gives a deal. The hero allows the other person to do whatever he wants as long as he doesn't bring her down. The punishment is getting smacked. The hero says " you will get smacked" because she either experienced it already in the past , and now gives a second chance, or she knows it may happen .
In the poem the hero says what she has to say : " I do my best", that ends her part. now it's time the other person accepts the deal - the relationship treat.
beautifully it ends by giving us the result of dragging the hero down, but also leaving us questioning on the meaning of "dragging me down" - to where?



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Poem is interesting. The hero of the poem gives a deal. The hero allows the other person to do whatever he wants as long as he doesn't bring her down. The punishment is getting smacked. The hero says " you will get smacked" because she either experienced it already in the past , and now gives a second chance, or she knows it may happen .
In the poem the hero says what she has to say : " I do my best", that ends her part. now it's time the other person accepts the deal - the relationship treat.
beautifully it ends by giving us the result of dragging the hero down, but also leaving us questioning on the meaning of "dragging me down" - to where?



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 29, 2012
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Becca
Becca

Rochester, NY



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