Endless

Never confuse a single defeat with a final defeat.  ~F. Scott Fitzgerald

~*~*~*~

Within these eyes

Lay shrouds of pain

Endless longing

Fore-longed shame

Little fairytales

Mask the pain

In her eyes

She plays the game

Whimsical glitter

Hides in the rain

Running away

Masking the pain

Time is all knowing

She won't hide for long

If Only they knew

Before she's to far gone.

Hanging onto memories

Of times long past

Can't give it up

Afraid to admit

Love is a game

Best fit for two

Sometimes love changes

Decides to leave you

Long time not knowing

Longing for her soul

She gave her life

Left a story untold

Who are we

To become this mess

Forever lost

In this sea of regret.

Times are changing

It's plain to see

But with time

Was the end of you and me.

Author's Note

I know this is horrible. That my poetry has seen better days. Do Not judge, My talent has gone astray.

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Actually not bad like the first stanza overall the whole piece is good love how it come together.
Excellent write.

[Revery]

Very moving, well written. You've expressed the intensity of it all well. Thank for sharing.

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

D: This is NOT horrible. One of my many fave's. I love how raw it is. Another great write! :)