I Hide Nothing.
A Poem by
Alicia Hirshey
Don't play innocent, I know what your about.
I know your shame It's easily read in your games Your filled with doubt I can almost smell it creeping out I see in your eyes What you long to let out The feelings you hide Drive you into a cloud You can't help but wonder If this is okay All your life you were searching Searching for something more Not once seeing Love was at your front door So easy a task To push it away Where will you stand On your judgement day? "I hide nothing" You foolishly said But all the while You stashed it under your bed Masking what was hidden The thoughts in your head
© 2011 Alicia Hirshey
Author's Note
Don't play innocent, I know what your about.
Reviews
You seem to be very angry lately. I like the intenseness of your poems lately
Posted 13 Years Ago
Lately you have had quite the flare to your words. I like it. Bleed it out, spit it out, scream it out.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Lately you have had quite the flare to your words. I like it. Bleed it out, spit it out, scream it out.
This is really good...powerful and emotional. A beautiful way to express pain. And if this is about what I think it's about then I'm sorry ):
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is really good...powerful and emotional. A beautiful way to express pain. And if this is about what I think it's about then I'm sorry ):
nice piece...loads of accusations though...aaaaah...life!
Posted 13 Years Ago
nice piece...loads of accusations though...aaaaah...life!
Oh Ali I'm so sorry. ):
Posted 13 Years Ago
Oh Ali I'm so sorry. ):
Ali, really cool piece I like it very much. Nicely penned. xo
Posted 13 Years Ago
Ali, really cool piece I like it very much. Nicely penned. xo
beautiful opening picture to this although it holds much sadness in it as well. "I hide nothing".... wow, wish that were true for all of us
Posted 13 Years Ago
beautiful opening picture to this although it holds much sadness in it as well. "I hide nothing".... wow, wish that were true for all of us
It sucks to be let down. "I know where your secrets lie. Behind closed door's Breaking loving ties. I wrote something also about being lied too.
Posted 13 Years Ago
It sucks to be let down. "I know where your secrets lie. Behind closed door's Breaking loving ties. I wrote something also about being lied too.
Some hide behind their innocence. It keeps them from facing their own truths..x
Posted 13 Years Ago
Some hide behind their innocence. It keeps them from facing their own truths..x
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