Suicide Me

Mark my arms
Nothing but hate
I am giving up
You wouldn't care anyway
Lash out
Marked as a fight
You'll still be breathing at the end of the night
How should I do it?
The thoughts flow through my veins
Fast and Easy?
Or
Slow and Riddled with pain?
Suicidal differences
Cast shadows on my grave
Will you be there?
Or
Will you keep the rumors coming my way?
When I'm dead
Will you rest in ease then?
Or
Will you keep longing?
Piling thoughts in their heads?
Your lies can be mistaken
But still you drove me away
Sitting back
You enjoyed this sick game
I forgave you once
Ignorance was my plea
You never cared
The hurt you caused me.
Push me further
I'm on the ledge
One step back
And finally I'll be dead.

Reviews

[Spookers]

Very strongly written. The anger is flowing out. Just perfect

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

I love this pome it is very powerful an speeks out in many ways. LOVE IT!!!
Stay strong.

[☯]

A very powerful and thoughtful poem. It really tells everyone not to play with someone's feelings, and the moment you say something wrong, is a moment that person might just balance off. Haunting and strong. A beautifully written piece.

[∂αʌ<..]

this is a very powerful poem but i think suicide is never the solution...
fighting back..fighting against it all..falling and rising up again and again is living!
living makes you strong and only then there is existing!

[CharlesMonroe]

This is so depressing ): but I love it though, it's beautifully expressed. Stay strong dear (:

[joshua deathdealer]

This is an awesome write. Favorited.

[Sweet Emotions]

This is amazing. I love it. I know that exact feeling, so I can really identify with this one. I hope you don't still feel this way Ali. This is my favorite line: "How should I do it? The thoughts flow through my veins."

[Kat]

cool poem :) never seen anything like it

[~DeathByButterflies~]

Wonderfully saddening... Great poem. The fact that I relate to this might be a factor in how it makes me feel, but I like it.