After you've done a thing the same way for two years, look it over carefully. After five years, look at it with suspicion. And after ten years, throw it away and start all over. ~Alfred Edward Perlman, New York Times, 3 July 1958
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i would say one of your best poems ever...
beautiful...poignant...the right touch of melancholy...the right touch of hope also...
feelings..emotions...
you got all the exact ingredients in this poem!
and im the first one to review!!!
yet another poem in my favourite list!
^^
I really like how your poems usually have a quote with them. Anyways, back to the actual poem :P.
I could relate so much to this. My favorite stanza was the fourth.
Fantastic write 100/100
This was a great poem many could relate to, the quote picture you put in is actually one of my favorite quotes that i live by. You did pick something many people could relate to, which is great actually. One of my first reads of yours so i'd like to see more greatness. (=
i would say one of your best poems ever...
beautiful...poignant...the right touch of melancholy...the right touch of hope also...
feelings..emotions...
you got all the exact ingredients in this poem!
and im the first one to review!!!
yet another poem in my favourite list!
^^