Jaded Dreams

      





















Alone we walk along the sand
Jaded lovers
Hand in hand
Throwing pebbles
Skipping a few
Holding on at the scheme
Maybe this is more than a dream
~*~
Blonde headed curls
Mine straight and black
Together we mesh
Like love gone back
Time is wasted
Shortened the none
This walk together
In the evening sun
~*~
Earnest judgment
Can be placed
Knowing nothing of struggles to face
Hold on to nothing
I do believe
Darling, you were meant for me
~*~
Empty beds
And cigarette case
Strewn about
All over the place
Daytime pleasure
Nighttime bliss
Who wouldn’t let it come to this?

Author's Note

"We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly." ~Sam Keen

Reviews

[Spookers]

It is flowing. Well written with ease

[Chris]

Sweet and carefree. I like how you ended it with a rhetorical question.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A carefree piece of love.........wonderfully penned

[Allison]

I love it. Its so sweet and everyone deserves to feel this way. With out a care finally in love. Its amazing

[☯]

I love love love the 'laidback' and summer sweetness feel to this. The picture especially really expressed this even more. An adorable and blissful poem. I enjoyed everthing about it. Amazing job :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Holding on at the scheme. I love it.

[Spiral Panda]

I hope it keeps coming, the overwhelm of bliss.

[∂αʌ<..]

aww...short and sweet and full of nostalgia also!
great one!

[Celeste21]

I'm glad you are ble to feel this Ali. You deserve it.