Walking gracefully Failing to make a scene Heartfelt lies leaving me Not once comparing The sadness on ones face Judging so quickly I was worse off anyways
Little girl Her parents never cared They didn’t want her They left her there Everyday is a struggle To fend for herself She didn’t choose this She had nobody else
Younger boy In his teens Black hair dye Eye liner scheme Inside his mind He is wanting to die You would never once notice Do you look in his eyes
Poet to some To most she’s a geek Dreaming a dream Within a dream She’ll never be anything more Nothing she writes will anyone adore Falling apart Tangled in this web Full of hatred Her only way of harnessing it
Mother of two Pregnant teen No less of a person A w***e she must seem Pointing fingers The stop and stare “what a life, Your w***e-ish ways have taken you there” If only they knew This wasn’t true There is more to her Than me or you
Twenty years old He’s made his plea Running from something Fighting to flea Hiding images He forged in his head What would he have done If he were his friends Endless confusion Tied into this knot Holding on to something That must be taught
So many stories Eyes love to tell Hold them back Your heart starts to wail Let it in time Be written on your face Let others know Who owns your day You are not you If your running away Stand up and fight It will all fade away
Hiding stories Most become truth Spiders spin webs To hide them from you Look at me now Do you see who I am Or do you see What is hiding within
When you judge, point your finger or look at somebody indirectly, do you know the truth behind why they are they way they are, Do you have any idea why they are this way? Or do you whisper sweet nothings until they are gone so you can just talk about them in your normal voice again?
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Wow, such a stunning poem. I really really loved this. I liked how you told each story and explained each situation. It touched my heart reading the short stories that explained each life of impressions and lies. The words within that really want to speak. An excellent piece of work. :)
"Dreaming a dream
Within a dream"
awesome write-your depth in every stanza reinforce your topic for this poem...
and,yes...judging before you actually know a person can cause serious problems. We cannot judge a book by its cover!
I can't express how much I love this (we need to invent a new word that is higher up than love, lol). The quote at the beginning pretty much made my day, and it will make me look more. We had an author come to our school one week, and stay in our English class. Her motto was "notice what you notice". She wanted us to pay closer attention, and I think you captured that in this poem.