Diamond Lies

Diamond Lies

A Poem by Alicia Hirshey

It wasn't your fault it was mine, for believing every word you said.
~*~*~*~

I love you
You’ll never see
The pain or tears this has caused me
Giving in
Buying time
Wanting nothing more than to survive.
~*~
Dagger is placed
Hold me down
Memories erased
Never once judging
A game you love to play
Deadly sins
I’ll never make safe
~*~
Medicated toxins
Leaving the brain
Shorter the while
We go insane
Symptoms intense
Leaving us a heretic mess
~*~
Missing every bit
Trying to get back
Push me away
I will continue to fight back
If only you knew
Death is a fact
Polish your shoes
Your Sunday robes
Watch me fall a part
Anything goes

© 2011 Alicia Hirshey


Author's Note

Alicia Hirshey
This was really just a mess that I had written on several sheets of paper. None were supposed to be a poem. But I got bored today and stuck them all together.

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Well you stucked them together beautifully! I truly believe poetry is brought together by several feelings, may not be all at once but it is from deep within!
Heartache is always an easy way to show our feelings, for the reason that we have all been there, but the pain is ours to hold!
I really enjoyed this piece of creation! Kudos!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Clear and precise, pointed and almost sire, a well written piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I LIKE IT FLOWS WELL.hate cap lock.I like the way you could read this backwards.
Death is a fact
push me away
leaving the brain
memories erased.Cool idea.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think it's great it reminds me of someone regaining the "pieces" that we sometimes have left out and lost.. So I think it's perfect as is.. :) x

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great job:) I like it alot.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Alicia Hirshey
Alicia Hirshey

Hartford City, IN



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