Diamond Lies

It wasn't your fault it was mine, for believing every word you said.
~*~*~*~

I love you
You’ll never see
The pain or tears this has caused me
Giving in
Buying time
Wanting nothing more than to survive.
~*~
Dagger is placed
Hold me down
Memories erased
Never once judging
A game you love to play
Deadly sins
I’ll never make safe
~*~
Medicated toxins
Leaving the brain
Shorter the while
We go insane
Symptoms intense
Leaving us a heretic mess
~*~
Missing every bit
Trying to get back
Push me away
I will continue to fight back
If only you knew
Death is a fact
Polish your shoes
Your Sunday robes
Watch me fall a part
Anything goes

Author's Note

This was really just a mess that I had written on several sheets of paper. None were supposed to be a poem. But I got bored today and stuck them all together.

Reviews

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

Well you stucked them together beautifully! I truly believe poetry is brought together by several feelings, may not be all at once but it is from deep within!
Heartache is always an easy way to show our feelings, for the reason that we have all been there, but the pain is ours to hold!
I really enjoyed this piece of creation! Kudos!

[Matthew Kult]

And it works beautifully, it actually flows quite well. For these to have been a mess I am impressed. Not that it means much, but hey. I love the pure and raw emotion, the blunt honest truth. Just an alround great write.

Matthew

[Kenneth The Poet]

Scatter shot, shotgun blast to the spirit. Good stuff.

Sometimes you have to leave poems alone for a while to fester and then it can be completed from there.

Love your work so far.

[∂αʌ<..]

this mess came out beautifully well...i think there was a rage and sadness part of it...
i always enjoy your writes...so true and always having this wow-effect!

[☯]

A very strong and beautifully written. I especially liked the lines:
"Polish your shoes
Your Sunday robes
Watch me fall a part
Anything goes"
Amazing write :)

[Shiningwolf]

This was a strong sad piece. I could feel every emotion felt in this.

[Solidad]

Happy accidents gotta love'em. On a serious note, I agree with Neva,
"The desperation of attempting to find balance in one's life and receiving no understanding from those around you as they head off to church to make themselves feel better. "
I couldn't say it any better so I just quoted it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

The pain inflicted by hypocrisy, unconditional love promised by the hand that is still withheld until perfection is seen by the one who claims to love otherwise. The desperation of attempting to find balance in one's life and receiving no understanding from those around you as they head off to church to make themselves feel better.

[Jess Holden]

Very good for something that wasnt suppose to be together :)

[Spookers]

That was different, but I enjoyed it very much. You know how to stick things together. Keep up the good work

[Aristede Craig Jr]

Lol it was awesome though art .... poetry is like most of the arts getting order out of chaos...