Losing Within

Endless emotions
Forget me not
Love me tenderly
Never let me stray
Into the abyss
Poetic bliss
Cover my marks
Fading away into my scars
*
Beautiful spirit
Working it out
Wanting to save me
Not knowing how
Walking dead
Living night terror
On my face
Masked with pleasure
*
Forever is forgotten
Times spent with nothing
Giving in to emotion
Growing in my head
Uncontrollable thoughts
Plague my being
Follow through
It’s what this means
*
Iconic lust
Visions portrayed
Angry bliss
Controlling my brain
Throwing away the emotion
Left with a mere glimpse of it
If only you had
No part in this.
*
Feelings overtaking
Making it impossible to escape
Feeling like nothing
Endless decay
Every second wasted hoping
You are my saving grace
*
Endless emotions
Forget me not
Love me tenderly
Never let me stray
Into the abyss
Poetic bliss
Cover my marks
Fading away into my scars

Author's Note

"Losing the battle I waged on myself Lock me up and toss the key Toys in the attic, it's all getting worse. Why won't they let me be? Oh God, make it stop. Inside I'm a danger to myself. I'm a danger to myself. Inside I'm a prisoner of my own hell. My own hell"-Five Finger Death Punch

Reviews

[Katub]

You've always got emotion and beauty in your work :)

[∂αʌ<..]

i like the way you write...there is always an amazing flow within...

[RedInk524]

"be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle" Plato
Good poem, i know that feeling.

[Lily Mae]

An emotional and heartfelt write. You've penned it well..xx

[Layla J Omorose]

Beautifully written with a smooth flow. The emotions are conveyed throughout the poem which pulls the reader deeper in.

[Chloe]

I'm completely in love with that song, just to let you know. This is so beautifully heartbreaking. Your writing is truly inspiring but I can't help but want to give you a hug from reading this.

[Lucy]

'Forget me not...'
So true, so sad, so beautiful.

[Fabric Pulse]

What Jess put.

[Jess Holden]

I seriously love this. Its got sooooo much emotion within it, and the format is amazing :)