Blissful Revenge

Iconic lies

Evil downpour

It can be seen in your eyes

Pushing away

Sheltering from the rain

Easy to play

Your love game.

*

Giving up hope

Losing all faith

Succumbing to possession

Overly protective

Destroying the sight of you

Killing you slowly

As you intended me

*

Backlash overcoming

Karma is free

Setting your goals

Losing sight of me

Like a ninja

Not afraid to fight

You will cower

For your own life.

*

Genius outpour

You’ll see in time

Easily distracted

Coming of the times

Reap what you sow

Expression so sweet

Silence is glistening

Kissing my feet

*

No satisfaction

Will you gain

You will never know

You caused me pain

Funny puppets

Playing the game

Who holds the strings

When I come to play

*

Running from nothing

Fear in itself

Be a woman

Hold up by yourself

Unforgiving

By both parties here

See in time

You will be hurt

By the ones you hold dear

*

You reap what you sow

Easily said

Who is it hiding

Beneath their bed

Running like crazy

Learning to get back time

It will be to late

Revenge is mine.

Author's Note

Revenge is a harmful action against a person or group in response to a grievance, be it real or perceived. It is also called vengeance or "payback" (in U.S. English).

Reviews

[Fabric Pulse]

"Who holds the strings when I come to play," that part is kinda spooky, lol.

[misha]

This is really good. Very impactful to whoever got you upset. Keep it up!

[Katub]

Beautifuly wrote,

[CharlesMonroe]

This is awesome :D I absolutlly love it. I relate alot to. This b***h likes to mess in my life, and I'll slowly kill her (: loved your poem..
keep writing ^.^

[∂αʌ<..]

No satisfaction..Will you gain..You will never know..You caused me pain
Funny puppets..Playing the game..Who holds the strings..When I come to play
i love these lines...you structured the whole poem very careful...placing each word in the right place...loved it!

[Chris]

I recited it out loud, sounds like each word was carefully placed and thought out. Well structured and you ended it perfectly.

Just saying: the last line made me feel like a badass. Good job!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

great concept and very vivid write! love it!

[Chloe Christine]

This is absolutely beautiful.
It's really amazing how you captured the essence of revenge.
How blissful, yet harmful.
Amazing. Goes into my favorites!