Lost Memories

Lost Memories

A Poem by Alicia Hirshey
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WOW!!! I can't beleive I still have this, It's old, written almost 6 years ago.

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Jagged edges

Tearing the pages

Killing the memories

That made me this way

Moving forward

Loving another

The way

He never loved me

Faith was shaken

No I’m replacing

Those horrible memories

Killing off what’s left of me

Beautifully mistaken

Tragically breaking

Endless debating

Truth has set me free

Letting me know that

No one is perfect

You are who you choose to be

Acceptance

Running in place

Never retaining

Heart is through aching

He’s set me free

Carelessly floating

Hard to control

The feelings overtaking me

Running the distance

Finding the courage

He will not be the end of me.

Jagged edges

Tearing the pages

Killing the memories

That made me this way

Moving forward

Loving another

The way

He never loved me

Endlessly searching

Answers turning

My motions in memories

Driving me crazy

Love this ocean

Washing me clean

Never not knowing

Who I was ment to be.

© 2011 Alicia Hirshey


Author's Note

Alicia Hirshey
I wrote this my Freshman year of high school. I cannot Beleive that I still had it lying around.

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wow amazing poem. And i still have alot of the stuff i wrote my freshmen year .

Posted 13 Years Ago


isn't it fun to find the lost treasures that we almost forgot. i have been doing that lately, its interesting to look back and see what we wrote even a few months ago.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, very good. One of my favs by you. Yes, it is quite amzing to look back on our older works and look at the little flare inside us that was just beginning and then to compare it to the enormous flame that roars behind our eyes now. Very nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, isn't it cool to see something that you wrote a long time ago?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Worth keeping!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the use of jagged edges. Great write. xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it, Ali. I still have PO-eds I wrote in 7th grade O.o Some are kind of spaztic and poorly crafted, so I doubt I'll be posting them anytime soon.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Alicia Hirshey

Hartford City, IN



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