Sapphire Ocean

Based on an image I had in my head.

 

 

 

Screams and shattered glass

Echo through the misty sea air,

As I hold onto the haunting memories

Buried in a seashell in the sand.

 

Glistening salty tears,

Dancing against the tide.

The moon beams like a spotlight

Giving me some relief of comfort.

 

Crashing against the rocky shore,

The sounds of a broken heart symphony

As my soul bleeds of sapphire blue,

Into the ocean, my sea of desperate dreams.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Taylor]

A totally cool poem with fantastic imagery. I was drawn by the line: "The sounds of a broken heart symphony." I am jealous of that line. A neat, concise poem.
Great work.

[Ruth]

Stunning imagery....cascades so well...beautifully written love...powerful! xx

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. Using the images of the sea made the poem stronger. I like the description of how life and the ocean can flow the same. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote