Sapphire Ocean

Based on an image I had in my head.

 

 

 

Screams and shattered glass

Echo through the misty sea air,

As I hold onto the haunting memories

Buried in a seashell in the sand.

 

Glistening salty tears,

Dancing against the tide.

The moon beams like a spotlight

Giving me some relief of comfort.

 

Crashing against the rocky shore,

The sounds of a broken heart symphony

As my soul bleeds of sapphire blue,

Into the ocean, my sea of desperate dreams.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dark Beauty]

Beautifully done,great write I loved it, another master piece, keep penning!!

[Chris]

Good images that affect!

Chris

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Absolutely beautiful.

[Enigma]

An exceptional use of imagery and metaphors. You recreated that image alright. Well done.

[Wandering Violet]

I like it, especially the "broken heart symphony". Nice phrase!

Sapphire blue is one of my favourite colours too:-)

[LinBin]

another accomplished piece of writing xx

[Dahlia Phoenix]

"The sounds of a broken heart symphony
As my soul bleeds of sapphire blue,
Into the ocean, my sea of desperate dreams."

These last three lines are something that touches my very soul as I repeatably read through it. There's an emptiness in there and the dark emotion you add with it along with angst makes it wonderful to read and memorable. Amazing poem!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

this feels of deep velvet classical gothic strains as the violin of the heart serenades it's own dusky pain~ beautiful flow~

[Dayran]

The creative quality of crystals merge into association with the tissue of life. They unite to form a greater capacity for life and its creation possibilities. The advancement of life is not possible without overcoming the view that the flesh is weak. The union should be affirmed and accepted for a greater progression. The heart sounds seek the quality of mind to explain its apparent inexplicable experiences. The mind is capable of it and your poem shows the way. Your write is an inspiration at the shores of creation. Nicely done!

[Rene Velez]

great imagery and I'm a sucker for it, this is a painting no doubt, a beautiful one at that, well done...