Lies

I wish for once I could take a journey and skim through the thoughts of your mind. Hoping for some kind of evidence to the murder mystery of my broken soul and the games you play with my heart. Empty promises linger on your tongue, words that can never be erased from my mind. I won't ever feel this way again. Trying to hide the truth of reality, but the truth I can always find. Lies, and more lies, digging a deeper grave.

 

By now, you must know what you're doing. Holding the strings of me and controlling every emotion. Every blissful kiss, a memory of bittersweet exctasy not worth letting go, but now it stings in my heart with every lie you've ever told. Lost in your eyes, it's hard for me to believe this is the end. You promise me the world, this time it will be alright....but something inside myself tells me its just another lie.

Reviews

[Liza]

Intense, dramatic. Love your flare! The highs bring the lowest lows don't they?

[LinBin]

amazing piece of writing, congratulations x

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

This is a great read. I like the emotion behind it and all the words you chose, and the writing style.

[Rene Velez]

love and loss, the abuse of a loving heart, love has many shades and some may be dark...

[These Haunted Hallways]

Oh i Hate lies!!!! I've been lied to a lot of times in my lifetime. I know how that feels. I hate rumors that aren't even true, and people who get others into trouble for no reason as well. There's sick, ignorant, and very stupid people out there who just do things to the innocent, 'cause they have nothin' else better to do. That's how they get their kicks. Great piece tho. Came full circle.

M.

[Science girl]

I seriously felt like you were writing this about my life. You created a great poem that many people can relate to. Loved it! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. Love is a mystery. Never know where it may lead. Need love and kindness/hope. I tell people go slow and easy. Good things take time. I like the questions raised by the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Enigma]

The bitter realization of betrayal by the one you trusted the most. The pain is very much there in every word. Excellent poem.

[lostboy]

it hurts when ,lies , are the truth but it happens. sometimes we see the end and dont believe it, sometimes we believe the end and dont .. want .. to see it.

[Dayran]

Poets who speak of lies - that's a contradiction in terms, unless its a game, then the poet ought to look at who's making up the stories. Such a story-teller knows what it takes to spin a relationship in the world, without which each human is simply a standing tree. When you come back to the spin someday, try not to forget how it began in the first place. Bittersweet ecstacy? Can I have that for take-away?