Enemy Against The World

Old write. But I love this one.

Confined in my own binary sea of imagination and creativity, stalking the humanity of a world that idolizes chaos and fear as well as hate against its fellow man. Society has turned against me, knowing the truth without ever knowing the truth. I stay hidden within the shadows of my own world of trials and tribulations and views of a world in turmoil - thoughts that shall remain unheard of. Hidden secrets and only my pen holds the key. With my pen, I am never silent, forming my own religion of God that exists. The muses and spirits that keep me in existence, worshiping and following only them. Against the royal democracy of a planet in the bowels of hell. To the humanity world, it is forbidden, I am turned away for not following such rules.

 

Rules are meant to be broken....an enemy against the world.

Reviews

[Ruth]

If the pen can push out the disease of ignorance mankind carries, then its more than worth it, I like the compact style of this a lot :) Courageous and distinct voice to it xx

[Beaner166]

Powerful and moving. This write touches a subject few talk about. Good write.

[Dark Beauty]

your words expressed were powerful and meaningful.Great job i enjoyed it very much, gets me thinking LOL

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Glad you brought this one out...........we do create our own world and rules with our pens sometimes, do we not? Excellent write.

[nowhere]

all rules are not meant to be broken, but i like the way you test them , they are meant to be tested. this world lives in fear , fear of lonesomeness, fear of being thought of, almost, fear of being independant. your pen is mightier than the sword. fear leads to defeat.

[Allen Smuckler]

old writes are ok...I do it all the time...and this is a terrific poem at that....though I might have classified it more as prose....anyway...that's not important
What IS important was that you expressed yourself poignantly and honestly and made me feel the angst and trepidation you were/are experiencing..
It's never easy but it is worthwhile..
good job, TxP Q
allen

[Mika Haruna]

this is so great! i loved this, you are an amazing writer!

[Enigma]

A beautiful write. The element of individualism beautifully blended with the imagery. A complete write and yes, I love it as well. :D

[These Haunted Hallways]

Great job with this! I hate rules, to think of it lol. They make everything limited and unfun. Ya can't do much with anything anymore. Yet, some rules im glad they have to keep some order, but, it's true, too, that even then those rules get broken everyday. And we're always left with saying over and over again, "Is that justice??" hehe. Great piece!

M.

[Dayran]

Sometimes we stop running away and hold our ground. Let those who thought we were false, come seek us. Truth always is, we play at losing it.