A Way With Words

Inspired by music and a wandering mind.

Observe and see with my words, while opening up your own mind and heart. For where I go, you can only follow. I can take you on a magical journey of the world or create my own as my soul bleeds ink from my pen. I can feed your thoughts and leave a trace of my existence as it lingers upon your memory. I can bring back hidden memories and remind you of the truth while rummaging through the piles of life...the beautiful moments...the darkest of secrets in between the lines of my creation. While searching for my own identity, you might find yours. A created sanctuary to escape the chaos of reality with the passionate kisses of a mind gone wild.  

Author's Note

Don't like the title of this much, so any suggestions whether be about the poem or the title - do not hesitate to say so.

Reviews

[Valentine]

I like "See With My Words" because this tells truth about all of us..If others would listen...just think of all they could see..nice one kiddo..Kathie

[Dayran]

A true landscape of that which lies in relationships. Suggestion for title - Journey Mine

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I find it almost quirky and clearly clever, if I am to suggest a title, for me, it would have to be, "Roads to the Word."

[Y.F.]

I think the title is very appropriate, though if you're looking for something a little more playful you could use "Pen's Way".

I like this one, though to be perfectly honest, I think the last line doesn't fit with the overall scheme. Just my 2 cents I guess. Still a great write.

[Sarah]

This is a really unique read, so I can see why the simple title "words" doesn't seem to give it enough credit. I'm awful at titles, I tend to overthink them and come up with something ridiculous, but sometimes it helps to pick one of the more powerful moments in the piece - in this case, I might go with "Mind Gone Wild". But it's up to you! Either way, I loved reading this, words really do carry you on an adventure!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Leaving a Trace of My Existence..............wonderfully penned and this is exactly what we poets and writers do.