WORTHLESS

Something I wrote over the summer. It doesnt feel good after awhile when people label you "worthless"

How much is a soul worth?

One so broken up by this world,

Full of ignorant, heartless b******s

Labeling me as a waste of life.

 

A crack in the glass of human existence.

Sharp knives of hurtful words

Stabbing at my heart and eternal tears

For what good I'll ever be in your eyes.

 

Overwhelming blackness of my mind,

 Sweet sucide dreams haunting thoughts.

My sanity wrote a suicide note,

But one of us is illiterate.

 

Worthless.

 

Author's Note

I dunno, feel like adding more. What do you think?

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I think it is perfect as is......I especially like the ending.......

[Tasha]

This was very powerful. I think you should add more to it. The emotion shines through and you can feel the pain of everyone calling you worthless.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[....]

WOW quite the powerful read, This write held together so well. Enjoyed the sad, dark write. Least that is how I see it. Very well written. Powerful emotion through out....xo

[Raindrop]

If you think you should add more, add. :) But I find this write a pure enjoyment to read. Very realistic about some things. I can definitely agree with: A crack in the glass of human existence.
I really liked it! :)