In The Silence

Deafened by the silence,

Alone in this empty place.

Left yearning for your voice,

And missing your embrace.

 

Like a waking nightmare,

I can't seem to wake up from.

Demonic voices and whispers,

The only voices I hear.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Valentine]

I can really feel the sentiment in this one..I love it..It moved me deeply as I have walked in those same shoes..love and God bless..Kathie

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A deepened sense of longing lays within your wording, I love your flow, broken and captivating, well done, one small edit, just as a suggestion would be to change the word company to embrace.

[Y.F.]

Hello-low-low-low? Are you here-eer-eer-eer? :P

I've spent most of my winter feeling sorry for myself for being completely alone in the world, instead of just picking up the phone or sending an email to someone. I was never a very social person, but if you learn to open yourself to others you can overcome this feeling more easily. Even if no one you know is available, put on your best clothes, walk outside and find something to do. You might have to walk through the night in search of something interesting, but you'll forget all about being alone once you find it, and even if you won't you'll still walk around and clear your head instead of staying home and wallow in sadness.
It's easier than it seems, and even though you'll have to force yourself into doing it in most cases, the end result is sure to be better than the alternative.

[lostboy]

silence isnt always good but its better than the bad voices . i like this.