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Out of the darkness,

And into the light

Into a world so strange and new

Your journey has just begun

With so much love surrounding you.

 

A love that will never end

Following you down your path

To experience what this world has to give

Surrounded by your loving family

In a home, sweet home you’ll live.

 

Never give up on your dreams

Keep them close to your heart as you grow

And even though you may not be so sure

In a world so strange and new

You’ll succeed with a heart that’s pure.

Reviews

[Michael X]

rayne, this loving poem has the embracing feeling of coming home, to walk into the arms of
encouragemnet, and certainly has inspiring effects, as if giving strength to carry on, to fight the
good fight, overcoming obsticles standing in the way of happiness, with the help of family to
give the extra push, to provide the candle needed to light the path of desinty in a darkened world,
most readers would be encouraged by such warm, caring, heart compelling motivational empasis

[Y.F.]

Every word is true and solid. :)

This is good. I liked how it flowed. Like it is a dream I am reading. Very good feelings placed in this. Great work!