Voodoo

 

 

 

Violate me and desacrate me,

With promises and lies.

Waiting for your sweet torment,

I surrender to your callings.

Sticking the pins,

Deep within my soul

Using me for your voodoo

Leading my fragile heart

Into bittersweet damnation.

Venomous words

Control me like a puppet

As I become strickened

With your promises and lies

Beckoned by your dark callings,

My once beautiful world

Falls into darkness

With every aching pin

Entering my fragile heart.

Reviews

[Noah]

raw and wonderful, loved every word

[Ralphy]

Wow, now how do you do that? You took a concept and put it in retrospec...you're amazing.

[Jane Doe]

Another absolutely delightful piece. And I agree with JC, it reminded me of NIN too. Your writing is simply amazing!

[JC Fox]

This had shades of Nine Inch Nails Closer to it.

[Midnight Rose ~*Anna Ro..]

I loved this. Excellent work.

[Y.F.]

Still didn't get that b*****d out of your system?
I do like the voodoo concept - very refreshing and unique, and you used it as a motive in the most superb way.
I hereby start the "free Rayne from voodoo" seance circle - anyone reading this, please close your eyes and repeat after me - Ommmm, Ommmm, Ommmmm.... :)