Lies

Your words

Penetrating my heart

With a dark feeling,

I'm being decieved.

Cleansing my soul

Everytime,

Praying and hoping

It's just a bad dream.

I trusted you,

To heal up my heart

Now the seams

Are coming undone.

Caught,

In the webs of your lies.

Reviews

[Y.F.]

Being lied to by someone you love could be devastating.
It makes it harder to be trustful of the people around you.
I like the honest emotion this piece provokes and deals with.
The flow is really great, as usual if I might add.
I have a real challenge for you - write something that's less than perfect. :)

[THERISA]

Being lied to by a love one are the hardest ones to forgive, even when they say that they're doing so for your own good. Worse, is when you know that they're doing so in front of you. I wish that i had an answer for you, Rayne. Sadly, i don't. Except to hope that you are able to find the strength to heal yourselve and forgive them. A long and hard task at the best of times. Thank you for sharing this very emotional and personal poem with us.

Therisa

[JC Fox]

*applauds* very well written

[Brenda Sue]

To tell lies is the worst and the hardest to overcome. Very well written. Wonderfully penned.

[Cats Eye]

Your feelings come out strong, everyone in this life has had a time when this has happened to them.

[M_S_Lay]

The hurt is evident.. and nicely written