Goodbye Darling

A collaboration with supervillianx0

Dear darling,
my love for you shall never cease.
Now that you've left my side I have to rest in peace.
Life is hard when you're living without someone who cares.
When we parted ways I fell into disrepair.
The despair I feel is too much for me to take.
I plan to drive my car into the nearest lake.
Drowning literally is way better than drowning in sorrow.
Please remember our good times because I'll be dead tomorrow.
I think of you and there's so much that I miss.
I only wish I could've gotten one final kiss.
But life's a b***h up until the day you die.
So I wrote this letter just to say goodbye.

     

 

 

Dear darling,

I received your letter yesterday

Yet all my tears for you no longer stay

Though I wish you were here with me

My heart bleeds for you and aches to be free

I entrapped my heart in barbwire for someone new

No one else in this world for me, except you

When you drove your car in to the lake

My heart drowned with you, I felt so much ache

Every night I stop and stare in the heavens above

Wishing you were by my side, giving me all your love

The stars in the midnight sky are sparkling

So I wish you a goodnight, my goodbye darling

 

 

 

Author's Note

supervillian - red italic
rayne - regular, black

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

I loved the way these two pieces fit so perfectly together. Appear as to lost letters from souls intertwined to the end of time. I thought you two really managed to pull something wonderful off together. Really enjoyed this.


Great Job!!!!!

[Y.F.]

Very good job on both parts.
Glad to see the collaboration tradition continues. ;)
This is very sad, filled with the bleeding of an unfulfilled love.
The rhyming is spotless, great imagery and it really does have a very unique flow.
Keep it up you two.

[Forest Green]

Very nice work. A nice blending of styles...good mix.

Excellent!

Daniel

[bluessadmood]

nice writing ,just like a song ,written in beautiful style ,lots of wisdom in it ,great