Stalker

something that came to mind.

Obsessed with the thought

Of having me for yourself

In the shadows you linger

And wait, til I am by myself

 

Telephone rings,

Hearing that deep voice

Not beautiful enough

So why am I your only choice?

 

Watching my every move

Til the moment is right

Filling my dreams

To the brim with fright

 

Standing above the moon

I see you standing there

Wondering in my thoughts

Just to give me a scare

 

My heart pounds faster

Knowing where you are

Every step I take,

I know you're not far...

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[THE BLACK SEAL]

it is ok but not really my thing. it is written well but the flow is a bit off to me. just my opinion

[None]

You captured the situation perfectly and had me looking out the window here! Wonderful title to go with this haunting piece.

[Sean M. Addams]

very creepy piece ... nice imagery and flow in this... great job on this one.

[E. M. Murren]

Really well done. You really expressed the feeling of being stocked well. Fabulous work.

[Fran Marie]

Great write and interesting read~Well DonE!~Fran

[oranges_melt]

OMG! That is really really good! Love it!