My Passion

old write. how i feel about poetry.

She is the goddess of my heart

Withholding a great embrace

With an essence of passion

And decadent sweet romance

 

A sweet serenity

Of Technicolor dreams

And passionate kisses

Of a mind gone wild

 

Escaping a chaotic world

Into my own imagination

Of celestial beings

Swimming and soaring

Through the skies of my soul

 

Who in their write mind

Would even suggest

Dreams do not come true

When so many worlds

Have already been created

 

It is but an obsession

One of my own

Living in my own world

 

She is my everything

She is romance

She is darkness

She is imagination

 

She is...

My passion

Reviews

[Vatsayayana]

This is exquisite.
It flows beautifully and I love your imagery.
Thank you for showing us this, your passion. Your love, your life.
It was so heartfelt I could feel down into my toes.
Just lovely.

[Antony]

I beleive you speak of your muse in this well penned piece, she who takes you to dreamland and provides you with inspiration as she take hold of your hand and guides your words to paper, that is how I read this piece. She belongs to you alone.

She is my everything
She is romance
She is darkness
She is imagination

She is...
My passion

Antony

[Collette]

So, so true. I really enjoyed this piece, and found it to be very relateable. The flow moves nicely throughout, and your imagery is superb. My favorite lines:

She is my everything
She is romance
She is darkness
She is imagination
She is...
My passion

That is everything poetry encompasses. Thank you for sharing an excellent write.

[E. M. Murren]

Really lovely work. Such power in this piece, yet quiet at the same time. Exquisite.

[Nik Dendera]

Beautiful. She's a harsh mistress at times, but none the less, she is what drives us.
Excellet write-I love the "Technicolour dreams and passionate kisses' line. And the ending just brings it all full circle perfectly.
Wonderful!

[Sandra K]

This is a great poem, you wrote it well. "She is my everything" is my favoret line.

Thank for sharing something so beautiful!

Sandra K!

[Jenny Davis]

Oh yes! I don't know where I'd be or how crazy I'd be without sweet poetry to get me out of my funk...
I really liked this, Rayne...excellent expression! :)

[Phil Sanders]

How delightfully written .. it flows with passion and desire ...