Lady In White

Lady In White

A Poem by Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen
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There's one 'demon' I can be thankful for.

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A lady dressed in white

Like an angel she sings

Sweet soft lullabies

With her gentle protective wings

 

Walking through the fog

In the clouded misty air

Through the light of the darkness

Ending my nightmare

 

Peaceful and serene

In her garden of flowers

Whispering so softly

As I lie in myself for hours

 

The shades of red roses

To match her hair

Floating through the clouds

Singing away the despair

 

Drying away

My broken tears

In this heavy heart of mine

Filled with sorrows and fears

 

Shielding me with her wings

Through the moonlit night

When I hear her sweet voice

I know everything will be all right

© 2008 Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen


Author's Note

Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen
Out of all the demons in my own mind, there is a lady dressed in white that comes to me when I'm at my darkest in my dreams. I assume she's my guardian angel.

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I'm not sure how you say this is a demon since demons - as far as anything I've ever learned about them - don't bring blessings or gentleness of any kind, but just the opposite. What you describe sounds loving and protective and I hope the "gift" you speak of them bringing is one of healing and not of death as at least of your previous reviewers said. I guess we all see different meanings in things, which is one of the great things about writing anyway. I always like it when someone sees something in my work that I wasn't even aware of or had considered. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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wow. where do you get your inspiration? it's so lovely and colorful. i envy.

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow! you really cant help but out-do yourself every time! your writing is better and better and without a doubt you have the mind of a poet and the heart of an angel; only angels would be able to rhyme so beautifully while hiding the sadness among the distant light know to darkness. i hope this makes sense to you as it did in my head. things don't always come out how i mean them so...........yeah. great write and thank you once more for sharing your beautiful talent with us!

monique♥

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very good! It flows with a charm and tranquility.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Awwwwww, man, this was so exquisite!!!! This was so perfect!! Absolutely beautiful. Hey, does she have a sister; for me? lol. Great work hun! Really nicely done :)

Mikey

Posted 16 Years Ago


Delicious writing ....

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I really like the way you describe this enitity as your gaurdian angel. Your dipiction is absolutely beautiful! ~ Jude xo

Posted 16 Years Ago


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this piece of subconcious mind throws light on some lost and perplexed persona who wants to fly

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Amy
Absolutely beautiful! It flows perfectly and the imagery is wonderful. You write really well!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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very well written, the rhyming and the flow of the poem went very well together. very creative :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Daimon or daemon derived from Greek mythology originally meant a supernatural enity Neither specifically good or bad. So I see no reason why your personal daimon should not be a protective entity.

Although what sprang immediately to my mind was my mother

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My name is Rayne and I have been writing since high school. I took a long vacation from writing, and slowly starting to come back into it again. I admit that I am not the greatest writer, I'm just doi.. more..

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