Wicked Pleasure

An attempt at writing Gay & Lesbian Poetry for a contest.. Any advice or suggestions is welcome.

Light reflects

On the beauty of eyes

The shining stars

Sparkling like diamonds

In the midnight skies of you

 

So divine,

Watching you

Hypnotizing me

With every move you make

Like a goddess in human form

 

So innocent,

A forbidden sin

With kisses so tender

Passionate, as my mind goes wild

Bound, I have succumbed

To this wicked pleasure

 

 

Reviews

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Bound, I have succumbed
To this wicked pleasure

Very nice imagery! Totally sexy and seductive...Good job!

[Vatsayayana]

Hmmm.... yum. Wicked pleasure.
This is fabulous. It's serpentine in its form.
Your words move so quick, its almost like a teasing taste with just a quick swipe of the tongue.
Your reader is able to draw upon many images and create their own feast.
This is one of those works where I would love to see what an artist would draw to compliment the words. Somethings that befits the imagery.
Brava!

[Marie]

Nice writing.