Perfectly Flawed

Perfectly Flawed

A Chapter by Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen
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Thoughts & Ramblings of a Beautiful Tragedy.

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The world seems fit to reject any one who is flawed. Make a mistake, or be the real you - you will be shunned. They seek and worship perfection while hiding behind their own masks and disguises of self-deception. Instead of showing their faces to the world. The saying be who you really are and no one else should be banned if it is not a truthful saying to adibe by in this generation of society.

 

I refuse to hide behind a disguise. Therefore, I am a memory. An afterthought - a crack in the glass of perfection. Imperfections are unique. Sabotaged, maybe, but not quite. A disgrace, I can live with that.

 

I am perfect. In my own way. Perfectly flawed.



© 2008 Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen


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Perfect!!
I love it.
Have fun. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I dont think people are flawed, but we may know more or less than other individuals, tho. This was a very thought-provoking piece, however hehe. A fragment sentence tho in sentence #3, and a mispelled word: 'Adibe:' 'Abide' in sentence #5. Other than those, twas a really good chapter!

Mikey

Posted 16 Years Ago


Perfectly Flawed -- A remarkable prose. I enjoyed this every word peeling back layers of lies we tell ourselves... and the other people tell us. But it was the imagery of the cracked glass, which really stood out as truly grabbing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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*applauds* My mind is so blank right now and I'm so blown away I don't know what to say lol

Posted 16 Years Ago


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The rule makers have always discriminated against something or other -- yet Nature roils with mutations and change -- it has always been so -- the perfectly flawed mutations are Nature imaginations, that come and go in this great infinity where both great and small shall all become extinguished, in Her great life are Loves many children to come, under Moon and under Sun and you, her Beautiful daughter, are such a one --

Posted 16 Years Ago


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