Inside My Mind

Inside the mind of a bipolar. Thought about extending it but I like it short.

 

The sun and the moon

fight inside my mind

With moments black as night

Or moments beautiful as day

Reviews

[.......]

I really enjoyed this pice, simple and to the point. Lovely

[DarkAngelWriter]

Thats perfect. Don't change it.

[Not Afraid of Bruises]

a good read - love the connections you've made here

[mattavelli]

Interesting!
I like short women.. or sorry, I meant poems.
Have fun :)

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

Sounds a litttle like bipolarism. Good portrailal.
Love All,
Mejasha