Eternal

Eternal

A Poem by Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen
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Got this in my head after listening to Evanescence's Eternal

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Love is eternal
A bond you can’t escape
An unending romantic journey
Sweeping you off your feet

Succumbing to the poison
Inside of cupid’s arrow
Following your heart
Straight down to your lover’s path

Almost like a curse
You are bound the one you love
In shackles and chains
Like a slave waiting for duties
To be done

Storms rage
As the fires of desire burn
Thunder rumbles with excitement
As the lightning of love strikes

Good enough or strong enough
Can’t help but wonder these things
In a love so precious
A dream world,
In an awaking state
A world in which to never escape

Rain pours,
As the thunder does roar
With an ocean of tears
Drowning in the pain
Of raging storms

Remaining together
A love that can last forever
For love is eternal.

© 2008 Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen


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I like this piece. I like it because, although I'm not sure love is eternal, it really describes why people seek it out with such passion. I WANT what you wrote. It's electric. Good piece. Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


You are bound the one you love
I think that maybe ther should be a comma or something there.
I think it will read better.
Love the poem though.
Love All, Mejasha

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is great.
There are strong images here.


Posted 16 Years Ago


Another great piece of writing and good luck in the contest.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Your poem casts love in a bittersweet light. Your metaphorical writing puts the emotion in its place. Good write.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Beautifully Tragic xPoetry Queen
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Passionate kisses of a mind gone wild, NJ



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My name is Rayne and I have been writing since high school. I took a long vacation from writing, and slowly starting to come back into it again. I admit that I am not the greatest writer, I'm just doi.. more..

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