Fear

Anxiety at its finest

Buzz

Light

Words

        "Done"

Signals

Understanding

Confusion

        "Why"

Silence

Waiting

Panicking

        Nothing

Walking

Listening

Thinking

        Nothing...

Sitting

Writing

Buzzing

        "Hi."

I have to wait

to hear what I

did wrong again.

Body shaking

Head spinning

Eyes watering

Hands fisting

Screaming

Fighting

Falling

Losing

Destroyed.

Buzz

        "But I love you."

Author's Note

I know it has potential but I'm not sure where to take it.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

there are several places to take it really, the obvious being to leave it alone and let it stand on it's own merit as a simple and effective piece, where I would suggest is to fill the lines with descriptive imagery on the bodies that ensnare those feelings and emotion! Just a thought! Well done, good read.