Temblar

I see you shaking

with a sensual desire

you took my body

and set me on fire

those blissful feelings

and passion arose

Temblar, you whisper as we where exposed

My body aches, candles were lit

All of our feelings exposed, and they weren't quick

Your voice heavy with desire, you call out my name

but I was in paradise, and I did the same

It was on my body, tickling me everywhere

Oh how I love it, the way that you share

We reached the pinnacle, the top of the hill

And yet, you were holding me still

You pulled my head toward you, and whisper in my ear

Temblar, you said

the feeling was unreal

Author's Note

What do you think?