What Choices Do I Have?

What Choices Do I Have?

A Poem by S. Meijin
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Do you ever feel like you were in deep despair and wondering what should you be doing? Well,this is a poem just like it.

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There's nowhere else to run
Nowhere else to hide
From the dark side that always hunt
Keep destroying our fragile heart.

The cloud of anger rose from the gust of fear
Giving birth to a vigorous storm of hatred
That moves along the path of suffer.

I was consumed by the mist of regret
So hard to just forgive and forget
They keep lingering inside my head
Continuously making me sad.

Shall I wither like an autumn leaf?
Shall I keep sinking in the ocean of grief?
Or shall I break free?

© 2016 S. Meijin


Author's Note

S. Meijin
Don't hesitate to give your opinions. Be free and feel free to do it.

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"Shall I wither like an autumn leaf?
Shall I keep sinking in the ocean of grief?
Or shall I break free?"
Therein lies the dilemma, right? Often enough we don't know which way to turn to and that's what makes it hard... This was relatable enough for me! I liked the flow here! Good work ☺


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

S. Meijin

7 Years Ago

Yeah... Sometimes we just need some time to make the decision. anyway,glad you like it and thanks.



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"Shall I wither like an autumn leaf?
Shall I keep sinking in the ocean of grief?
Or shall I break free?"
Therein lies the dilemma, right? Often enough we don't know which way to turn to and that's what makes it hard... This was relatable enough for me! I liked the flow here! Good work ☺


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

S. Meijin

7 Years Ago

Yeah... Sometimes we just need some time to make the decision. anyway,glad you like it and thanks.
I myself have always known what I should do, but this gives a great insight into the feelings of otherwise.

Fantastic write, love the line "I was consumed by the mist of regret"

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

S. Meijin

7 Years Ago

Thank you. Really appreciate it.

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S. Meijin
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Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia



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